These days, people adopt misleading avenue owing to lack of respect and anti-social behaviour. However, freedom given to ternagers to live free by their parents, while they choose incorrect path and start taking some drugs and cigars, which lead to anti-social behaviour. This essay will look at the core reasons for this and propose some solid solutions.
One of fhe main causes of the problem is that poverty. By this I mean, the lack of education and afar from responsibility are the main factors of poverty. Due to poverty people embark some unnecessary things like playing cards, addiction of drugs, robbery, etc. which help to disrespect others and create anti-social behaviour. For an example, currently from the news, some younsters started chain snatching from the women’s neck, in the market. Because of disrespect, unemployment, etc. Hence, the solution is for the poverty is to create awareness against education, to improve living standard, and to develop the slum area.
Another problem is about the nurturing of children. To be more precise, by the lack of nurture to children create disrespect to others and start non-violent things. To tackle this issue, parents and teachers too, help their children to provide good nurture to protect them from misbehaving.
To sum up, lack of respect and anti-social behaviour has become more, due to poverty, inattention of parents to their children, etc. This are the serious problems, and unless we can forge awareness to protect the generation. My view is that the main responsibility for solving the problems lies with parents, teachers and the government.
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...re to protect them from misbehaving. To sum up, lack of respect and anti-social...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, look, so, while, i mean, in fact, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24904214559 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78902992507 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574712643678 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7620819824 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.625 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3125 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19395415126 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062690928949 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804977914036 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118427197606 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539300874934 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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