Nowadays people throwaway old things and adapt new things.Do the disadvantage of throwaway society outweight any possible economic advantages?
It is true that, people have a tendency to discard their old or damaged positions when they own something new. Modern Culture is comsumerst one. It is also known as disposable culture or use and throw culture. With the rise in modernization, a man has transformed his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking bare footed in the jungle to take the first step on the moon. One of the most contraversal issue today refers to that whether the throwaway society is beneficial for economic development or not ?
On the one side of the arguments, there are people who argue on the benifits of the throwaway society. The main reason for believing is that with the throwaway of the old things the people of the society moves forward. Moreover throwaway society can increase the advancement of the technology by enabling us to find more cures. As a matter of fact, that if we adapt new things or new technology there is automatically an increase in our employment. For instance, if we adapt new machinery we need more labours and corrospondingly more work is done by the workers.
On the contrary, it is also possible to make opposing case. It is often argued that there are also some disadvntages of the throwaway society. People have this opinion because demand for more increased use of machinery creating more pollution and waste electricity. In the second place, we use more additional resourses and it takes long time to decompose. In other words, we use plastic bags in higher quantity but as we know it takes very long time to decompose which effects our society. Basically, throw away old things and adapt new things creates drifts and compativeness between friends. For example, if one friend buy a new thing to compete that friend we also buy a new thing.
As we seen that there are number of answers to this question. On balance however, I tend to believe that we have to use 3R's process that is reduce, reuse and recyle of the product to increase the economy of our society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, for example, for instance, as a matter of fact, in other words, it is true, on the contrary, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7492795389 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7369961827 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524495677233 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2634157268 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.4 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.35 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236167189376 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704400389255 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073307914512 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135158067827 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0956330835932 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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