Geriatric society deals with the fear of being alone and unproductive most of their time. Based on the above statement, some people prefer to stay with retirement communities then to live with their families. This essay will discuss 2 main positive aspects associated with this trend.
The primary benefit to live in old age homes is companionship. Because of the identical age group living in the house, individual find it much easier to make friends. However, there can be certain disputes in many circumstances but, it could be solved with the similar understanding over a topic. To elaborate, on an average 78% people choose to live with there age group, as they find it to be more comfortable and accessible. In short, the level of communication remains same when society of same fellowship lives together.
The other merit is the increased sense of security while living with similar people. Although, family members tend to protect the older generation but sometimes the younger persons are the one who threaten the vulnerable older people. Perhaps, percentage of such misdeeds are reduced when living with same peer group. For example, recent crime report published the data of year 2019 and stated that 23% of old people living with their families are more prone to misbehaviour from the young ones.
To conclude, geriatric population tend to live in care homes rather than in between there own families. This has led to more beneficial influence then negative when, considering 2 main factors of fellowship and protection.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, then, while, for example, in fact, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14655172414 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62933860923 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60775862069 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8067079455 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8461538462 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8461538462 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407628182517 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131650599364 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926250683108 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221670838922 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794516789628 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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