Although it is true technology is developed a lot in these days But it cannot replace the museums and art galleries which preserve historical things.I am fully disagree with the given statement.
To begin with, generally people visit to museums and galleries with family and friends. it give them chance of enjoyment and opportunity of having an experience of new journey. what is more, new generation is less known about historical background.in this way, they can take advantage of these places and have a knowledge of historical objects and customs.Furthermore, things which we seen on computers, cannot describe the reality. No matter how vivid computer screen. When people see things in museums and arts, then they came to know the value, which is sometimes difficult to understand properly on computer screen.
Apart from this, Art galleries and museums have their own importance which have kept historical and popular things such as ornaments,weapons,cloths and so on.But without having these places, cultural things will be lost. As a result, Upcoming generation could not seen them in reality. Moreover, government have to spend huge amount of money to preserve historical things but they can set small charges to public as a ticket. by doing this, collected money from tickets will be helpful for arranging expenses.
In conclusion, No doubt computers are playing important role in the technical era but it cannot replace art galleries and museums. because such places are necessary for the preservation of historical objects
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, apart from, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, it is true, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3237704918 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07254347094 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594262295082 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.8452752498 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.25 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246585143372 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817233579312 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441873243614 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141664681307 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173522020527 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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