Nowadays some people think that public libraries are not necessary, while others disagree.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion
There have been a controversy on the use of library. It is argued by some that national libraries is of no importance, while others disagree i agree with this notion and reasons will be discussed in this essay.
Some people are of the notion that state owned libraries are not needed.They believe that
due to the advancement and proliferation of digital technology.They believe that with the use of mobile phones, and laptops and data connection and at the tap of at one's finger tips ,an individual could access the internet and browse as much information as needed . Advocate of this group believe They also claim that unlike the local libaries,the online libraries could be accessed in the comfort of their home, regardless of the time of and day.
However, a certain individual disagree with this view and believes that local libraries are still beneficial and I agree.Firstly, information and materials gotten from the public library are hundred percent extremely reliable and accurate, thus they have been properly researched on and backed up with plenty evidence .In addition, public libraries contain old manuscripts, historical books and modern fictions that contain varieties of language which is a good place for scholars to access and get concrete information. Secondly ,the public library is usually situated in an atmosphere that is conducive for study with less noise. Individuals can comfortably read an article articles with less distractions from family and friend.
In conclusion, although both hold varying view,It is my considered opinion that public libraries will still remain more useful and available even after 10 years because they provide a condusive condusive environment, and up-to-date information
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42647058824 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90967485896 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621323529412 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 147.394400759 49.4020404114 298% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 184.5 106.682146367 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 20.7667163134 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.875 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178916300173 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685420673294 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525158884188 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113031601636 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590341058709 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 13.0946893788 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.81 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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