Nowadays some people think that public libraries are not necessary, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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...s argued by some that national libraries is of no importance, while others disagr...
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...of no importance, while others disagree i agree with this notion and reasons will...
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...at state owned libraries are not needed.They believe that due to the advancement...
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...braries are not needed.They believe that due to the advancement and proliferation...
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...es are not needed.They believe that due to the advancement and proliferation of...
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... to the advancement and proliferation of digital technology.They believe that wit...
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...nd proliferation of digital technology.They believe that with the use of mobile ph...
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...They believe that with the use of mobile phones, and laptops and data connection ...
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...ptops and data connection and at the tap of at ones finger tips ,an individual c...
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...d data connection and at the tap of at ones finger tips ,an individual could acces...
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...ta connection and at the tap of at ones finger tips ,an individual could access ...
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... and at the tap of at ones finger tips ,an individual could access the internet ...
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...,an individual could access the internet and browse as much information as need...
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... access the internet and browse as much information as needed . Advocate of th...
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...nternet and browse as much information as needed . Advocate of this group beli...
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...d browse as much information as needed . Advocate of this group believe They al...
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...ch information as needed . Advocate of this group believe They also claim that ...
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...lso claim that unlike the local libaries,the online libraries could be accessed in ...
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...hat unlike the local libaries,the online libraries could be accessed in the comfo...
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...raries are still beneficial and I agree.Firstly, information and materials gotten from ...
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...ials gotten from the public library are hundred percent extremely reliable and accurate...
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... researched on and backed up with plenty evidence .In addition, public libraries ...
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...d on and backed up with plenty evidence .In addition, public libraries contain o...
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...on and backed up with plenty evidence .In addition, public libraries contain old...
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... evidence .In addition, public libraries contain old manuscripts, historical book...
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...ontain old manuscripts, historical books and modern fictions that contain varieti...
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...s and get concrete information. Secondly ,the public library is usually situated i...
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...mfortably read an article articles with less distractions from family and friend. ...
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...clusion, although both hold varying view,It is my considered opinion that public li...
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... that public libraries will still remain more useful and available even after 10 ...
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...n after 10 years because they provide a condusive condusive environment, and up-to-date information...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42647058824 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90967485896 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621323529412 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 147.394400759 49.4020404114 298% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 184.5 106.682146367 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 20.7667163134 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.875 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178916300173 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685420673294 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525158884188 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113031601636 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590341058709 0.056905535591 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 13.0946893788 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.81 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.