Nowadays, some universities offer graduate students skills that assist to find
employment, but some people believe the main function of a university should be to
access knowledge for its sake. What’s your opinion?
As university education is the last stage before the starting of career, many people believe
that it prepares students for employment only, but the fact is that it serves a lot many
purposes. In this essay I shall discuss the various functions of a university.
Universities provide specialised education in fields such as medical, engineering, commerce
etc. They provide library facilities, which support the curriculum. They provide laboratory
facilities for science and technology related subjects. They send students to factories and
industries so that they get practical experience. This job-oriented training helps them to
understand the working conditions and also gives them an idea about competition in the
market. They also create job opportunities for the students by arranging campus interviews.
On the other hand, universities also perform other functions which help the students in
their personal life. They organise co-curricular activities such as cultural programmes,
sports, debates, fairs etc. They gain many qualities such as self-confidence and positive
attitude, which help them in their future life. Moreover, some people just go to university
for gaining knowledge just out of interest for the subject. For example, a doctor may want
to learn French language just for interest in the language.
Furthermore, a university is a place to know more about the world because there are
students from across the globe in a university. For many, who may never travel abroad, this
may be a chance of a lifetime for them to broaden their horizons and know more about the
different cultures of the world. For example, in LPU( Lovely Professional University), there
are 200 students from Malaysia, Korea and other parts of the world.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, universities do not simply prepare a person
for employment, but also have many other functions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43333333333 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96386384453 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573333333333 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1733824665 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8823529412 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.094226273263 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0303986982229 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384075695895 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0282896663357 0.151304729494 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316341250272 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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