Nowadays there are more opportunities for women than there in the past some people think that this situation has caused more problems than it has solved.agree or disagree?
In recent times, new doors of progress are opened for women ranging from education to workplaces as compared to the bygone days. Owing to this, a question is raised that has this trend offered more issues than solutions?The answer could be no.
To begin with, the primary benefit of women empoerment is economic contribution.With the every passing day , women are now hired not just for blue collar jobs but for white collar jobs too. Most of the leading companies have been appointed women for leading positions since they are responsible, dedicated and intelligent. A survey conducted oxford university has revealed that after hiring women employees the profit of Google has been raised immensely. Hence, they significantly contributing to the society as well as nation.
On the other hand, it is asserted that working of women creates more problem than it solved. Child rearing can be the best example. Several women are giving more priority to professional progress over personal obligations. They devote all their quality time to prove themselves. This behaviour leads to bad nurturing of children which consequently leads to bad society as today`s children the future of nation. A data published by The tribune shows that children of working mother are generally engaged in drugs trafficking.
To conclude, although the independence that is offered to women these days has some adverse impacts on society , the economic contribution of women can not be neglected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, if, so, well, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32340425532 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87976460946 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629787234043 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6181571663 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2307692308 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0769230769 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210584215581 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067141283232 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748714619732 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122230342574 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04276840425 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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