nowadays University education is very expensive some people say that universities should reduce disease especially for less fortunate students of those coming from rural areas to what extent do you agree or disagree with the statements?
Nowadays, the abrupt rise is observed annually in the fees structure of educational institutes or universities. Nevertheless, some traditionalists claim that the universities should have to put step forward in order to help underprivileged and poor Students by reducing the fees - in favour of common belief. Even, as per my notion, in spite of the modern education system - which ,undoubtedly, needs sound monetary base to run - the universities should step in, at this moment, to address the concern of rural student's education.
To begin with, the students, especially from the rural area, cannot afford the costlier education - as most of the universities offering today. Sometimes, as a result of this, they are not able to finish their graduations -which ,in particular, lead to surge the illiteracy rates and unemployment ratio in the country. If the University education is offered to particularly needed student - decide on the basis of family economy level - with the lower fees structure or by providing the interest-free education loan than that would be a great help for them. Not even this, this will, for sure, do a good turn to the pernicious issues of country such as unemployment.
On the practical note, the infrastructure facilities with well-equipped laboratories cost a lot, to the education universities as well. Additionally, today an accommodation with 3 time better quality meals are also included in the tuition fees of the universities. Logically, in order to deal with the aforementioned all financial hurdles education institutes do not have any other option excepting, increasing the fees structure.
However, as per my point of view, it is not a big deal to take a financial help from the third parties such as well developed manufacturing companies. Furthermore, the government can also allocate the certain share of fund to the education institutes. This would be, eventually, indirect help to nation itself, as it will resolve server issues of illiteracy. Consider, for example, the Indian literacy rate was surged by 70% in the year 2015 compared to last decade, due to financial governmental help to the university - which lead to improve the educational qualities at roughly same fees. Seen in this light, this approach seems to be incontrovertible to help underprivileged ones.
In a nutshell, the cited evidence supports my view that albeit the universities have to deal with today's costlier education, they can work as a "joint-venture" with the government and effectively help deprived students in order to make them graduate.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'third', 'well', 'for example', 'in particular', 'such as', 'as a result', 'in spite of', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.249471458774 0.247107183377 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.116279069767 0.155533422707 75% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0951374207188 0.0946595960268 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0528541226216 0.0501214627716 105% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0232558139535 0.0437548338989 53% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126849894292 0.122226691241 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0253699788584 0.0403226058552 63% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.38546109453 2.80594681477 121% => OK
Infinitives: 0.046511627907 0.0326793684256 142% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.118393234672 0.0861772015684 137% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0190274841438 0.021408717616 89% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00422832980973 0.011925033212 35% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2586.0 1933.35771543 134% => OK
No of words: 414.0 316.048096192 131% => OK
Chars per words: 6.24637681159 6.12580529183 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.20517956788 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.345410628019 0.374742101984 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.280193236715 0.28420135186 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.231884057971 0.203846283523 114% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.178743961353 0.137316102897 130% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38546109453 2.80594681477 121% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.037074148 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562801932367 0.56093040696 100% => OK
Word variations: 66.1358053642 60.7387585426 109% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 25.875 20.7743622355 125% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.908492643 49.517814964 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.625 127.492653851 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.875 20.7743622355 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.875 0.814263465372 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.99599198397 125% => OK
Readability: 53.8943236715 49.1944974215 110% => OK
Elegance: 2.08791208791 1.69124875643 123% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275288400044 0.332605444948 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101367087067 0.102741220458 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0593457930309 0.0668466124924 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.634653889732 0.534860350844 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.135117972994 0.148594505496 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130726909818 0.134430193775 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552054184368 0.0742795772207 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.441468439751 0.324371583561 136% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0840767249584 0.0638462369009 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195977218836 0.228012699653 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462360385962 0.058150111329 80% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 5.90881763527 186% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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