Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?
In the modern world technology are increasing day by day. At present people can easily communication with other people using technology. Sometimes technology has affected relationship in various ways, I believe it become positive than the negative effect.
Technology is an important on relationship in business, education and social life. Firstly, people who are businessman always needs to communicate with there client. Sometimes it is not possible face to face communication so people use technology like mobile phone is one of the easiest way to communicate their client or other people. Secondly, student can learn many important things via internet. Many foreign university provides online video lesson and student can do it via internet. Skype is one of the way that students interact with their teachers and can solve their any study related problem. Finally, technology is also important in our social life. People can easily communicate from one place to another place using technology. For example, my cousin lives in the UK and his family lives in Bangladesh. He always interact with their family via mobile phone or internet. Although he lives far away from their family he can always communicate with their family via technology. In early year people wrote letter for communicate. At present we can easily communicate with any person within a short time for technology invention.
On the other hand, people can make friends easily via internet. For invention of technology people can communicate with different person in different countries. For example, Facebook is one of the social media where people can interect with different person. we can make friends with other people and know about their culture via using facebook. Sometimes technology has affected our relationships. Nowadays people prefer communicate via technology rather than face to face communication. Sometimes people fall a trap to believe a person.
In conclution, technology has made our life easier. Technology improve our communication as well as we can know many things about the world. So I think technology development brings the positive impact in our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 216, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...ationship in various ways, I believe it become positive than the negative effect. T...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...cation and social life. Firstly, people who are businessman always needs to communicate...
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Line 3, column 830, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'interacts'.
Suggestion: interacts
... family lives in Bangladesh. He always interact with their family via mobile phone or i...
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Line 3, column 887, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ir family via mobile phone or internet. Although he lives far away from their family he ...
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Line 3, column 1143, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a short time for technology invention. On the other hand, people can make frien...
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Line 5, column 260, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...ple can interect with different person. we can make friends with other people and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, i think, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39644970414 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87274297807 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46449704142 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9379094749 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.1538461538 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286014848547 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891418261294 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528967955445 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198177527378 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705921002927 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.15 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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