The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
The line graph illustrates the number of enquires received in a city by the person, letter or email and telephone from January to June over a six month period in 2011.
Overall, the number of enquired received by person and telephone was an upward trend while enquire received by letter or telephone was downward trend over the period given.
In the beginning of the month, around 900 enquire received by telephone while around 780 and 430 enquire received by person and letter or email. The number of enquire received in person gradually increased exceeds the telephone in mid-march and reached the peak almost 1900, which was the highest number in the June. On the other hand, the number of enquires received by telephone had fluctuated during the first three month in 2011 was 900 to 1000 and it remain stable till April. After that, the number was dramatically increased to 1600 in June.
The number of enquire received by letter or email decreased to around 780 to 410 from January to May and it was the same during the next month.
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- Given two bar chart shows destination of undergraduates and postgraduates student of the UK,other than full-time work in the year of 2008. 67
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- Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...e had fluctuated during the first three month in 2011 was 900 to 1000 and it remain s...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 456, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'remains'?
Suggestion: remains
...ee month in 2011 was 900 to 1000 and it remain stable till April. After that, the numb...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, may, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75690607735 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3540969031 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.447513812155 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7961996517 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226503658995 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133612854592 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.092461172723 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181639471685 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0992103875212 0.0819641961636 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.