Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Many people think that students who are study in the university should chose their preferable subjects whatever they want. Other people believe that students only studies science and technology related subjects such as physics, math which will important for their future. In this essay I will describe both these views and give my opinion.
In university there are varieties of subjects like engineering, economics, and BBA etc. students should chose their preferable subjects which they are interesting. Every subject is valuable and students can develop their career by their preferable subjects. For example, students who are study in BBA or MBA they can develop their career in banking sector or multinational company. In contrast, students who chose in arts they can study in law. Some students want to be teacher or university professor and they do study and research of some specific subjects which will help them to reach their goal. All subjects are equally important to develop their career so students should choose those subjects which they want to study.
On the other hand, some people believe that university students who study in science and technology related subjects they have bright career in future. Medical and engineering subjects are more demand in abroad and there are lots of scholarship opportunities on those subjects. As a result most of the students chose science related subjects and they want to study abroad and develop their career. For example, most of the large company like Google, Microsoft and NASA are situated in abroad and most of the time they demand of those students who are study engineering or science related subjects. For this reason, most of the students want to study of those subjects which will give them a better opportunity in future.
In conclusion, university is a place where a student can build up their career. It is no matter what subjects they are studying. All subjects are benefits for develop their career. In my opinion, student should chose of those study area which they like and which are suit for them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 33, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
Many people think that students who are study in the university should chose th...
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...ferable subjects. For example, students who are study in BBA or MBA they can develop th...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...elated subjects they have bright career in future. Medical and engineering subjects are m...
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... the time they demand of those students who are study engineering or science related su...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ich will give them a better opportunity in future. In conclusion, university is a plac...
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Line 7, column 284, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... they like and which are suit for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11143695015 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5017945761 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.395894428152 0.561755894193 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7712233007 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7368421053 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9473684211 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42105263158 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.45887950254 0.244688304435 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173624655829 0.084324248473 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104514357923 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.327090337327 0.151304729494 216% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680096578842 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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