Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?
Has this become a positive or negative development?
Technology is the most powerful meaning in these days. It changes the human life in variety of aspects. It simultaneously made everything easier and more complex. In the past, people used to visit each other to interchange their goods, but today they need some emails to do that. Technology has a great impact on work, relationship and life of human. For example, a man can divorces from his wife, just by a message, there is no longer need any meeting or court.
Today, there is no certainty in everything, so it is impossible to attribute absolute positivity or negativity to the effect of technology in our life. Since, it has bad effect or good effect dependent of its usage. For instance, smart phones have changed human life from 2008 when they were supplied in the world with their incredible abilities. By having a smart phone, you just need to turn on GPS and find your location without asking anyone. Also, it should be noted that in the past, when someone went to trip, have some difficulties to communicate with his family or do their job, but today you use internet application such as Whats app to call other.
On the contrary, technologies have bad impacts on some individuals specially teenagers who use some inappropriate apps without knowing their harms. For example, yesterday, news showed adolescent who raped a female kid to imitate violent series which was shown in the social network.
To wrap it up, technology has some merit and demerit which both, together would have their impact on people. In my view point, there must be constrains to use it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 375, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'divorce'
Suggestion: divorce
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Line 2, column 635, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...ay you use internet application such as Whats app to call other. On the contrary, te...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, for instance, such as, in my view, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81918819188 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64157162078 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627306273063 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2545393672 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0666666667 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103271517701 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0337238515374 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343272555261 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0558261493197 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039167115369 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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