Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.In what ways has technology affected the types of relationship people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?
Technology has radically changed every aspect our life over the last century.Blessings of technology can be easily seen in transportation and communication sector as well.With the invention of different kinds of devices and gadgets people have come closer which,were unthinkable previously.Such kind of advancement has made life easier though there are several drawbacks such as making people self-centered and excessively introvert in some cases.
Our morning starts with the phone call from our loved ones and we can easily be informed about what is happening at the remote corner of the world within seconds.Cell-phone,internet has turned the world into a global village where people are like a big family.Business and trades can be conducted from a remote place,we can travel across the globe within a short time whereas even hundred of years ago it would take days,months or years in some cases.Plethora of communication and social media such as Facebook,Whats app,Linked in has showed us the power of mass communication and in some cases how it can change the course of history.Is has become much more easier to share our view and customs with others all around the world and hence,people are becoming more tolerant and reverent to different cultures.
However,with the ease of communication there comes some negative effects as well.As most of the information shared and distributed are not passed through the lens of scrutiny,is has become common to propagate propaganda and false news.
In some cases,some political and fundamentalist parties are using this boon of technology to radicalize people.Another disadvantage worth noting is that,easy access to mass communication has made people self-centered.Nowadays we have more virtual friends than we do in real life which is sometimes,disrupting our social and family life.
With advancement of communication there comes some good things and some bad simultaneously.It is us who decide whether it becomes a curse or benediction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, second, so, well, whereas, kind of, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53896103896 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.67421166204 2.80592935109 131% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 20.2975951904 301% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 228.584688901 49.4020404114 463% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 341.2 106.682146367 320% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.6 20.7667163134 297% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.6 7.06120827912 235% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154266412724 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806059413378 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0274569763858 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806059413378 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274569763858 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.5 13.0946893788 271% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -7.36 50.2224549098 -15% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.4 11.3001002004 260% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.74 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.07 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.1190380762 261% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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