It is true that many children are spending their spare time with electronic gadgets like mobile phones and tablets these days.It can be attributed to the emergence of new technology. I believe that an excessive usage of such electronic items for entertainment is a negative development among children.
To begin with, over use of those gadgets will adversely affect children's health .This is because,when children use a smartphone for long hours or a day ,he or she may get some physical problems like eye pain,back ache and consequently this will leads to a major ailments. This problem mainly happening due to less parental care or availability of internet connection at home so they sit and browse it prong time with or without having food.Therefore,It is clear that the phone usage affect the individuals healthy significantly.
Another justification is that over usage of cell phones or tablets will decline the interpersonal relationship between parents or siblings. Those kids sometime only focus on their online friends rather than their own family members ,which lead to reduce face to face communication at home.For instance;in recent years many social sites are replaced by right communication between .As a result ,at early age itself they become alone and sometimes they are not able to solve any problems now and even in future in their personal life due to improper communication.
In conclusion,spending long hours with electronic gadgets are not only ruin the youngsters health but it also will break up the proper communication one another.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.272 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10963406207 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.114884764 49.4020404114 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 188.285714286 106.682146367 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.7142857143 20.7667163134 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.5714285714 7.06120827912 235% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132225951981 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606575534942 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337111045242 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.07703297391 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442828496302 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.2 13.0946893788 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.49 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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