Nowadays young people spend too much of their free time in shopping malls. Some people fear that this may have negative effects on young people and the society they live in.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Shopping malls, in modern society, have become the primary location for youngsters to spend their recreation time. However, some people have reservations about this phenomenon as it may endanger youngsters and pose several social issues to their society. As far as I am concerned, such an idea is potentially flawed owing to several reasons which will be demonstrated in the essay below.
To commence, the malls may act as a stress relief therapy for the young in the era when they have to make great attempts to make ends meet and this may lead to causing stress in this group. As a matter of fact, the demand of looking for a method to temporarily escape from the negative world is accumulated in the young community and malls are an ideal option for them. The malls offer a great number of conveniences that help young people leave their worries behind, for instance, just enter a mall and the cool airflow from the air conditioners can erase your frustrating feeling caused by the hot weather in Ho Chi Minh city.
It is worth mentioning that the expenditure of the young tends to increase in the service industry which shopping malls are a small part. Such a rise in spending may pave a way for the positive development of the manufacturing branch and contribute to the wealth of the whole economy of a nation as well. A case in point is Giga mall in Thủ Đức district, since the time of its appearance, it has boosted the consumption of youngsters and the economic status of the surrounding area has recorded a flourish regardless of being a remote suburban district.
To sum up, spending time in shopping malls is not completely a worthless decision of the young since they are beneficial in several aspects, both to the young in particular and the economy in general.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, may, so, well, for instance, in general, in particular, as a matter of fact, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75884244373 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7025833459 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56270096463 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.0872594233 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.0 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285594185564 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103461820869 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621510632087 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162176522055 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395597865298 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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