Nowdays people have to work for longer hours under stressful condition Do you agree or disagree Suggest the way by which the job condition can be improved

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Nowdays people have to work for longer hours under stressful condition .
Do you agree or disagree?
Suggest the way by which the job condition can be improved.

It goes without saying that these day a lot of people are working in all sector in underpresser for achiving their company's goal and their aim. This condition has become a problem in modern era . An argument has been put forward that nowdays people have to work for longer hours under stressful condion. According to me , this statement holds a valid ground .

There are a plethora of reasons why I thing these days people are doing work in stressful condition. First and foremost point which comes to my mind that folks are completing work in limited time . Because every company want to earn...

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Because every company want to earn money from their employees
Because every company wants to earn money from its employees

every sector of work also do work
every sector of work also does work

due to this people spend a lot of time on work
Description: check books how to use 'due to'.

There are many solution of this problem.
There are many solutions of this problem.

Sentence: These things also load stress on workers due to this people spend a lot of time on work.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and people

Sentence: Thirdly , in every firm set some target for getting high position and good salery due to this people do work hard get promotion .
Description: The word due is not usually used as a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to due
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and people

Sentence: It goes without saying that these day a lot of people are working in all sector in underpresser for achiving their company's goal and their aim.
Error: underpresser Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: achiving Suggestion: achieving

Sentence: An argument has been put forward that nowdays people have to work for longer hours under stressful condion.
Error: condion Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: nowdays Suggestion: ways

Sentence: Thirdly , in every firm set some target for getting high position and good salery due to this people do work hard get promotion .
Error: salery Suggestion: salary

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No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2

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Score: 4.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 254 350
No. of Characters: 1173 1500
No. of Different Words: 145 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.992 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.618 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.159 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 76 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 49 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 25 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.941 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.846 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.471 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.324 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.575 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.102 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5