nowsdays more people are choosing to live with their friends rather than with their family. what are the reasons and effects of this problem.
in these days more message are choosing to live with their friends rather than with their family.I will discuss in upcoming paragraph there are many reasons behind this problem.
first and foremost some peoples go to cities because cities provide them many facilities such as education,medical ,transportation.nowadays education important for our life.so people stay in cities and get better study to claim the leader of successalso Medical and transportation facilities which are in cities moreover, cities in same field them job opportunities. such as many companies industries are available in urban area. then individual can uplift their living standard and can earn bread and butter.
furthermore, more people are living alone which the cause of homesickness they can collect in bed companies. for example taking drugs and become criminal. additional in masses can not aware about their culture and tradition.
as my way of Thinking family is part and parcel of everyone is life and they should spend time with their family
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 162.0 315.596192385 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43209876543 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09519739493 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672839506173 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 506.74238477 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 97.9945789317 49.4020404114 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331370696155 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127174906441 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.180810433146 0.0667982634062 271% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221069311281 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.214948438978 0.056905535591 378% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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