In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
transportation is a compulsory part to transfer people to other places or countries, whatsoever travelling or working. it is often argued that building a faster railway to connect each city is more important than changing other transportation. I believe that the most critical is to invest on the existing public transport, like taxi or bus.
To begin with, there is a well development of railway system now. Enjoying a fast train to everywhere is not difficult to deal. For instance, if we are staying in hong kong as well as finding a suitable method to arrive in Beijing, High-speed railway would be the innovated measurement for us. travelling a particular country is easy via the completely railway system, as long as it can reach by train. also, while we may not satisfy with the speed of the typical train, it is improved now and that is an old news about the train which can drive over 300 kilometers. Therefore, I believe that the mature railway technology would not be the first issue.
On the other hand, there are several developments on road designing that we should concern. In hong kong, traffic jams are the frequently matter which would obstruct our daily life not only affect working but also influence leisure time. So, enhancing the efficiency of road transportation, such as restricting vehicle driver to drive on the busy highway on the weekday, it could prompt a smooth road management as well as strengthen the working rate of employees who take the bus every day since the spending time on the bus is reduced.
In conclusion, because of the mature railway technology and there are a lot of recommendations can be researched on existing public transport, I reckon that the circumstance of public transport should be superior.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, i reckon, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94932432432 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91324954616 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591216216216 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3215705883 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.692307692 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7692307692 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210751429133 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727424523436 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479336757275 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128360691298 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590566346106 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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