In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend more money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Other believe that the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
In recent era, public transports are developing more and more in metro cities. group of people think that it is mandatory to spend much money on constructing new very fast railway networks, while other group of people believe that money should be utilized on improving existing public transport. this essay will explain about both the views in the passage ensuing below.
First of all, mankind are too much busy behind their work in further, lot of time is consumed behind to and fro activities. Therefore, it requires to develope new high-speed railway networks. after constructing the new railway networks, it would reduce a lot of time of people behind their daily transport activities. Furthermore, local businesses of people would also skyrocketed. As a result of this, economy of the country will also raise up. According to the survey, in U.S.A, county will also raised up to 15% because of introducing the high-speed metro rail project in 2005.
On the other side, improving the existing public transport, it will require less budget rather than other new transport's establishment. As well as, while developing current public transport , existing resources will be used instead of creating new resources like improving the speed of train by developing design of current train engine. In addition to this, total developing cost of existing project is less than new project. In general, in metro cities, due to lack of land availability, 75% rail transport are renovated within its existing role also rail corporation reduced 60% of its overall cost.
after analysing the both the views, i am inclining towards the later view, about development of current public transport. because of this, we can utilized major resources like land, money and others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in general, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21830985915 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71441553713 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545774647887 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6112012698 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31054069353 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974603732717 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116723157861 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202466358295 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152704162598 0.056905535591 268% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.