In this modern world, many people are opting for a specialist to take care of their elderly family members. This could be considered as a positive trend as it is beneficial to the old generation in various ways.
To begin with, in this fast paced world, people live a hectic life with no time for their family. Elderly population is supposed to be taken care very well as they mostly need the assistance of a second person in their further lives. Hence, old age specialists are hired by these busy people in order to take care of their elderly relatives. They could turn out to be a good companion to these elders and also their medical responsibilities are also taken care. As a result problems caused to older generation due to loneliness are also resolved.
Furthermore, old age homes are available in every nook and corner of the world. These organisations are also beneficial for the people who couldn't afford to spend some time with their families. Elderly population are taken care very well at these places. They get mates of tbeir same age and could spend their retirement age happily. Experts are available to take care of the residents of these organisations. Hence professionals make a change in the life of old generation, who are under their supervision.
To conclude, though it is the duty of children to take care of their elderly parents, in this busy world they are unable to provide better care to older people. Hence, it is suggested to have a professional to take care of these greyed generation as they assist them in their needs and be like a good companion during their depressed state.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Hence,
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...l responsibilities are also taken care. As a result problems caused to older gener...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...f the residents of these organisations. Hence professionals make a change in the life...
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Suggestion: it's; it is
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...to provide better care to older people. Hence it is suggested to have a professional ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, second, so, well, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76428571429 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66610431996 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489285714286 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6381026393 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10097053343 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429847526724 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545609852254 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901358642696 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681660078578 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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