It is true that obesity problem is grasping children health thoroughly especially in developed countries. Many people believe that main culprit behind overweight is increasing trend of the fast food chain within countries while others argue that parents are responsible for ill-health of children.
It is obvious from many research results that lower quality foods particularly fried and junk foods raise the weighted related problems. Nowadays,the number of fast food outlets are growing owing to increased demand. Firstly, As people don't want to cook at home or due to the busy schedule they could not spare time to prepare food and consuming food from these food chains. Secondly, these shops are easily accessible and selling the food at low prices with additional 24-hour delivery facilities. Thirdly, it is fashionable among children to spend time restaurants either with parents or friends.
On the other hands, parents are also equally contributing for the poor health of children. Since parents don't have time to prepare food at home and they are giving readymade packed meals for them. In addition, children have more indoor entertainment activities such as computer or video games so they don't have time for outdoor activities or exercises. Moreover, parents are spending more times on social sites and TV and giving fewer attentions to children habits.
To conclude, both factors are equally responsible for children health problems but parents can halt these issues by paying more attention to children food and other negative habits.
- In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it? 52
- In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.What are your opinions on this? 78
- The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. 84
- The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000 an the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years. 84
- The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 145, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... the weighted related problems. Nowadays,the number of fast food outlets are growing...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, in addition, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38617886179 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64592930738 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605691056911 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2635907606 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.416666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0833333333 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358590195291 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131185081687 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739079906363 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225859175117 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608693841994 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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