Cosmetic surgery in this day and age is hotly-debated topic that often divides opinion. People can surrender themselves to a cosmetic surgeon's scalpel due to numerous reasons. However, the drawbacks of cosmetic surgery cannot be overlooked.
First of all, it is worth considering the reasons for which people modify their looks with the help of cosmetic treatments. First reason is perhaps a person who cannot stand facing mirror due to distorted image and in low self esteem due to his/her own appearance can opt for plastic surgery and boost the confidence. Secondly there are plethora of occupations that demand impeccable beauty for instance Air-hostess and actors in glamour world, need to have a perfect look in order to be in a lime-light.
Furthermore, Plastic surgery can play a crucial role in restoring the actual look if someone is a victim of a major accident. Surgery that can bring their previous face/look back is a blessing to them. It can enable them to live their lives normally with confidence once again.
On the flip side, drawbacks of cosmetic treatments also cannot be ignored. Such treatments are loaded with huge amount of chemicals and steroids. Frequent use of such harmful chemicals can lead to numerous skin diseases and cancer in a long run.
To sum up, despite of its negative results, people are opting for cosmetic surgeries very often to enhance their looks and gain confidence. Weighing up both sides of the argument, the advantages of getting cosmetic treatment outweigh the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'surgeons'' or 'surgeon's'?
Suggestion: surgeons'; surgeon's
... can surrender themselves to a cosmetic surgeons scalpel due to numerous reasons. Howeve...
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Line 2, column 210, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and facing mirror due to distorted image and in low self esteem due to his/her ow...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, for instance, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.132 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77336185883 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2205653559 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6428571429 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161908561584 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576521830807 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461531160381 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901836186289 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426610954501 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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