The numbers of refugees and immigrants increase. What are the possible cause and solution of this provide specific reason and example sounder countries.
Nowadays, more and more countries are sufering from great numbers of immigrants and refugees. This essay not only discussed the causes such as employment and safety behind this trend but some solutions to mitigate this issue will also be shared.
Lack of workplaces is the primary reason of increase the numbers of migrates because the native of this country face difficulties to find the suitable job with higher salary as well. However, in developed nations they not only join the better jobs but also obtain the maximum remuneration. Consequently, immigrants live the high quality of life. To examplify, had the Canada not provide the wide range of employment with 30 dollars for an hour then it would not have the dream destination of several people. That is why to solve this the government must do part to prevent this problem and they sould provide the right to immigrants to get a suitable work with high salary.
Beside from the trouble of grow the numbers of migrants mostly nations are also tackle the issue with increase in refugees. The key cause of this difficulty is the save livelihood because some time in their home country serious situation like wars are occured therefore for the proper safety they migrated to another countries. As a result, in other countries they feel their self free from any dangerous conditions. For instance, after the world war second ended in 1945 there were 7 to 11 million refugees displaced for safety and still living in Germany, Astria and Italy. So, to mitigate this difficulties it is must for United Nations High Commission for Refugees that they give them proper safety in these worse situations.
After discuss the essay i conclude that, this essay covered the two areas for grow in migrants and refugees like unemployment and protected from danger and second area their solutions such as more chances of employment and protection.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, second, so, still, then, therefore, well, as for, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00316455696 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54865134888 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556962025316 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8252489577 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.615384615 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3076923077 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231077091305 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785756145202 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049397202143 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1420100305 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516312820707 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.