Once children start going to school, their teachers have more influence on their intellectual and social development than their parents.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Teachers play a crucial role in the cognitive and behavioural development of students than parents. As they are well trained and quickly assess the behaviour of students in all activities.I am totally agree with this statement.
Firstly, the teachers are responsible for the children academic and intellectual development as well as teachers also take care of linguistic development and basic skills including social and behavioural etiquettes of children. For instance, a research was conducted by the teachers on the illetrate and literate children to detect the development level of children. Hence, study proved that literate childrens are well developed than literate.Morever, children always look up to their teachers as they are answerable to them.
On the other hand , influence of parents can never ever be underestimated. Firstly, parents are constant companions,guides and witness to all the joys and sorrows of children in their childhood. Secondly, emotional bonding of children is extremely high with their parents.
Overall, both parents and teachers have their share of influence on the little, impressionalble minds of children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, look, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 172.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70930232558 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28358298267 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 176.041082164 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0479536667 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.111111111 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7777777778 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325389362773 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135034215015 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684356072687 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188911587174 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591633025934 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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