One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing.
Do you think the advantageous of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
The new achievements in medical science have positive impacts on human life. Nowadays, thanks to these advancements, people have become more hopeful to live a longer and healthier life. Obviously, there are both merits and demerits to this issue.
There might be possible disadvantages to life expectancy increase. Considering required cares for aged people, families might encounter some problems in terms of medical care. The situation would become more disastrous when due to lack of a supportive family for an old person, he or she must be sent to the old age home. There also seems to be economical drawbacks to the rise of longevity which leads to growth of family and government expenses, including costs of healthcare and insurance. But this is just the half of the picture.
The advantages of increase in the average age of life are noticeable. One outstanding plus point is that most people would benefit individually in that they will have more time to fulfill their wishes and obligations. Seeing this point from another side, it turns out that old people would have a happier life because they can spend more years with their families. There is a further advantage to live longer and it is related to social relationships, owing to the fact that senior members of the society are able to transfer their wisdom and experiences to the next generation to direct them having a better life. It is clear that living for more years can make a sense of joy and liveliness throughout the society.
On balance, for all the negative aspects of longevity on economy and healthcare, I think the merits outweigh the demerits. It is my conviction that prolonging people's lives using medical advancements can influence society in a positive way. As a result, it should be accepted as an achievements of the new age and the necessary facilities must be prepared to minimize its disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 223, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ical advancements can influence society in a positive way. As a result, it should be accepted as ...
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Line 7, column 280, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an achievement' or simply 'achievements'?
Suggestion: an achievement; achievements
.... As a result, it should be accepted as an achievements of the new age and the necessary facili...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99369085174 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83243518029 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574132492114 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.746702152 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9375 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4375 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227828428279 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723437247777 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464703381763 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127624093174 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307757785014 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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