Improving medical care would affect in the increasing of life expectancy and people live is also longer. Although it has positive and negative sides, in my point of view, the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.
Regarding the negative impacts, the better quality of medical care the higher governments' budget in health sector that will directly affect the increasing in tax we should pay and probably decrease the budgeting of other areas which related to the development of the country. Additionally, rising life expectancy and live longevity would increase the number of elderly people. Unfortunately, the rising figures of old people does not provide the better productivity as elderly have to retire from their job and do not have the ability to work.
In spite of the drawbacks, being life longer and having longer life expectancy would reduce the mortality, subsequently, the happiness scale of the country. This could be due to the elder generation would have more times to spent with their families and their grand children so that the working parents do not have to send their children to the daycare. Parents would not feel guilty anymore and they would be more productive. Moreover, the old generation would contribute more to the society as they can start their new business after their retirement. Furthermore, they can share their experience to the younger so that they can apply it to their role in any sectors.
To sum up, despite having negative sides, a better medical care would provide the more benefits to the society and their quality of life.
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- The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit during the same two periods 80
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- The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1007751938 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6247494236 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515503875969 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0030608254 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.636363636 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20163602588 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977904487542 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124590738231 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162430999997 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106413433913 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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