One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing.
Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
In modern days, changes to the better in health care system make it possible to live 80 years and more. Also, that development improved people's level of life. These improvements in human life have more negative effects than positive.
First of all, the population of the world increased dramatically. There are almost seven and a half million people because of a length of life and high life quality were developed well. Now it is dilemma for same governments how is organised people life and charge for all of them with work place. For example, there are 10 million unemployment people in the USA and this number is growing.
Another problem is food supply. Planet cannot give enough food for all people. According to the International Medical Institute statistics, one of third of the population is suffered from starvation. Also, the Earth had afflicted by live improvement which leads to soil erosion, because more people need more food producing. For example, in Kazakhstan, farmers have wind erosion on there fields because of forest cutting for the plantation in last decade.
Finally, one of the main issue is seniors. More and more people retire and same governments cannot supply all of them with state pension. For instance, in Japan, one third of the citizens have reached the retirement age and the number can overweight workable population soon.
In conclusion, I think longer live and better quality of life bring less advantages than disadvantages.
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- Write a report on the data provided which compares correlation between attained education, weekly income and unemployment rate in the USA. 78
- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing.Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...For example, in Kazakhstan, farmers have wind erosion on there fields because of ...
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Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun advantages is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...r live and better quality of life bring less advantages than disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, so, third, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10373443983 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6885853613 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601659751037 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.054642261 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.875 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0625 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220782107016 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715105687976 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686794110182 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130312479242 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575762001757 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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