This day and age , many people becoming rely to much computer and internet. It can be seen that the way of education . Nowadays many big universities give opportunity to their students to study online from home which is incredibly useful and effective type of education.In this essay is considered about the advantages and disadvandages.
To begin with, online learning has a variety of amenities . Studends have a great chance that they can study from home or wherever they want . Also, it does not demand on any special clothes which means they do not need to wear uniform . What is more, they use e-books rather than paper book and other materials which are very helpful for students . The quality of classes are much interesting and innovative.Learners have their own studyinv platform with special cabinet like room that nobody else can enter so it is very safe.
Another factor to consider is , there some drawbacks on online classes . Firstly, some pupil can not affor to buy a laptop or other electronic device and status of internet may not be good . Although, there a few people that do not take responsibility for themselves which means , they do not attend online classes . On top of that, the effectivenes of courses may be bad.It depends on a teacher as well . Consequently , the marks of students might be lower
By way of conclusion, it is really effective to give students this type of occasion . But , they should be under control by their parents or teachers . I strongly believe that in this situation will continue in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, really, so, well, of course, to begin with, what is more, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05138339921 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09725677141 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.2975951904 246% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 234.911387549 49.4020404114 476% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 255.6 106.682146367 240% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.6 20.7667163134 244% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.4 7.06120827912 346% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102192702398 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632268536862 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0157639310698 0.0667982634062 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0583653262975 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164012651025 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.7 13.0946893788 212% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.73 50.2224549098 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 11.3001002004 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.9 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.1190380762 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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