online shopping has become these days. What are advantages and disadvantages?
with the development of technology, people do their shopping on the internet instead of traditional stores. personally, i firmly believe that this tendency both positive and negative effects.
on the one hand, some drawbacks from several ways. the first negative is that customer do not ensure about the quality of product after receiving the goods. in some case, products sold online are often less reliable and the products which is delivered to customer might have a pooer quality such as the color, the material is not same as the online advertising. furthermore, because online purchase is easier and quicker, people tend to buy too much, which would lead to an over-shopping and a large wast money. besides that, their are many combo, products in sale to attract shopper. this is less likely to happen compared with shopping in store.
on the other hand, there are some benefits of trading online. it is more convenient and quicker way to shopping due to people can buy the stocks everywhere without going to the stores or shopping mall. as a result, consumers can save time and avoid the traffic jams. for example, Lazada is one of famous web which provide a large number of different stocks and customer can visit those sites and make purchase easily. moreover, these online stores are availble24/7. this allows people can shopping despite they do not have free time on weekend to visit the stores. instead of going to the traditional stores which are limited by time, shoppers over the world can seach for their favorite items on the internet.
in conclusion i believe that shopping in the stores is replaced by shopping on the internet. people will benefit from of shopping if they consider all the pros and cons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91438356164 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49774480755 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544520547945 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4524158613 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4117647059 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1764705882 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137157654988 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482565397711 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553595290507 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881481308788 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309882638193 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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