Online shopping is increasing dramatically. How could this trend affect our environment and the kinds of jobs required?
In this day and age, people have a tendency to shopping online as a major method to make a purchase than ever before .This trend may bring benefits and have some positive impact on our environment in a short term but it also do more harm than good in the long run
In terms of environment, the popularity of online shopping will reduce the number of some kinds of vehicles to stores and the amount of exhause fumes and greenhouse emissions as well. For instance, with just a delivery truck, is able to carry goods with the large amount of goods to customers.This will limit vehicles use to the lowest. In a short term,it reduce environmental problems.Whereas, in a long term, it would surely have an adverse effect on our life and environment alike.For example, And if shop owners want to carry a large number of goods, they have to divide into several trips to live up to the fullest the demand of customer.If this continues persistently in a long period of times, its outcomes leave enormous environment such as leading to polluted air,some diseases.
Related to effect of the kinds of jobs, in labour market nowadays, online shopping created a wide range of employment opportunities for people like deliver drivers, traditional retailers or even start-up people. But this enable people to fall into bankruptcy and go into dept.In a long time,not only they have to face unemployment but some mentality problems.
In conclusion, Thanks to the widespread popularity of online shopping brought tons of benefits to human life in the short time but its disadvantages do outweigh its advantages and lead to serious issues in the long run
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- Writing task 1 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
...thod to make a purchase than ever before .This trend may bring benefits and have s...
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Suggestion: This
...od to make a purchase than ever before .This trend may bring benefits and have some ...
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Suggestion: does
...environment in a short term but it also do more harm than good in the long run I...
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Suggestion: This
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...icles use to the lowest. In a short term,it reduce environmental problems.Whereas, ...
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Message: Did you mean 'reduces'?
Suggestion: reduces
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88888888889 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84256734369 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562724014337 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.886793565 49.4020404114 261% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 227.333333333 106.682146367 213% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.5 20.7667163134 224% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.6666666667 7.06120827912 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172564060059 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777241000268 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637828087448 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105644817098 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435764029793 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.9 13.0946893788 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.79 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.97 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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