Technology has highly developed over the past decade. It is obviously observed in online shopping field which does cause certain effects on the environment and job type’s trend now.
Online shopping have impacted on environment both positively and negatively. Talking about the benefits of online shopping on the environment, shopping online is a way to reduce air pollution. Since every process is done on the Internet, shoppers tend not to go to the store by their own vehicles. This act helps cut off the gas emission which contributes to the greenhouse effect. Moreover, an online store does not need to look like a brick and mortar store with full of fancy decorations and noticeable position. Employers may not destroy the building to remodel on purpose of suiting the concepts of the shop which also limits the pollution, noise and building materials. Vice versa, the drawback related to the environment is the increase in packaging demand which leads to high plastic consumption. This trend will definitely deteriorate the life quality of every kind of animals and human as well.
At the time online stores were born, it has gradually restructured the job distributions. Technology has changed the way people trade goods and trading method has changed the demand for each job. E-commerce minimizes workload and creates chances for jobs relating to technology and shipment such as IT, web designer, page manager, shipper, etc. On the other hand, online shopping is responsible for laying off workforce who directly manage the shop like shop workers and sales force.
To sum up, despite the fact that online stores contribute to plastic overconsuption and unemployment of job sector, online shopping is a huge convenient idea but also an environmentally friendly solution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ry kind of animals and human as well. At the time online stores were born, it ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, kind of, such as, talking about, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25874125874 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83864406748 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1568189358 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.266666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257649188939 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829599306519 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721194112137 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159776393328 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432138228132 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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