As only as small percentage of people have interest in the art government funding for this is waste of money spending in this on health and education would be far beneficial to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Art is form of expression to express abstract feeling in front of others. Some echelon of society argue that it is futile to spend money on art, as, small proportion of people have interest in these art. Government had better cost money on education and health. I, however, strongly disagree with this school of thought. Number of arguments surround my opinion.
To begin, art has become livelihood of people. People carry art in their life and sale the piece of art. Doing this, they earn money. Moreover, they get name and fame in the field of art and earn big chunk of money. These artists represent their nation on the level of global. Apart from this, these arts represent culture of countries. Artists carry their culture in the form of art. As an illustration, dance art, every culture has different dance art which shows their culture front of the other countries. Moving further, these arts have become part of tourism. Tourists fascinate by these arts. Tourists visit other country to see their culture and art. Thus, art helps to boost tourism in any country. That's why it leads to growth in economy of country
Beside this, education and health have become dominant sector in the eye of government. A big chunk of money is arranged for these sectors. With a view to boosting these sectors no need to compromise with the budget of art sector. As, art sector has a significance in the life of people who carries these arts as bread and butter
To close, government had better give preference to both sectors. Since, as well as health and education is important in the life of people but also arts is play significant role in the life of people who totally rely on these arts
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70945945946 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36682351322 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513513513514 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4112127472 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.3636363636 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.4545454545 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234298809467 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766245741446 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615350030167 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163025230831 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468725421068 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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