The only way to solve the increasing crime rate of young offenders is to teach parents better parenting skills. To what extent do you agree?
The behavior of youth is vulnerable to harmful surroundings they are exposed to. And thus, I strongly believe this signifies the role of parents in applying strategies that can bring out moral and optimism in their children. In this essay, I will elicit why this is the only way and how parents can do this.
Charity begins at home. While I believe other factors such as schooling and family status have an impact on the juveniles of the society, parents are the first ones whom a baby interacts with. For instance, a study in Australia showed that infants with working parents grew up to become drug addicts despite studying in a well-reputed or a disciplined school highly reputed schools.
Various methods can be taught to the parents that can, in turn, be applied to the young generation. According to a study, Youth, who were involved in criminal activities had depression issues. Thus, communication plays one of the most vital parts of parenthood. An adult should realize that speaking like a friend will allow the child to openly share his insecurities without reluctance. However, using a harsh tone can make them more rebellious. Furthermore, not only verbal interaction but also incorporating fun activities in their schedule such as going to a cinema or parks or sports club, are also an effective approach to lower stress levels. For example, many studies have proved physical activities to lower stress levels i.e. increasing endorphin levels in the brain. Other than that parents should keep a record of their child’s school activity through weekly meet-up with class teachers.
In conclusion, parents have more power to transform minors’ personality. And they can do so by implementing certain strategies wisely. I believe the government should arrange more awareness campaigns related to this subject for addressing the issue effectively.
- The only way to solve the increasing crime rate of young offenders is to teach parents better parenting skills. To what extent do you agree? 84
- The government's investment in arts, music, and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement? 78
- The only way to solve the increasing crime rate of young offenders is to teach parents better parenting skills. To what extent do you agree? 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23588039867 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83792890421 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651162790698 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.2327667627 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7058823529 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7058823529 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134206380632 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374875973226 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415631978576 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810393368055 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248788079818 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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