When it comes to sports, almost people think that you have to be physically strong to be successful and the rest believe that mental strong is much more important, they have their own valid points to justify their belief. In my point of view, both of them contribute to the success in sports toghether.
First and foremost, physically strength is extremely important in sports because in some sports like football or basketball, we are always seeing the impact between the players so if you have better endurance, agility, pace, you will have more percentage of winning. Moreover, injury is the obsession with professional athlete and you have to be physically strong to recover as quicly as you must be. For example, in the sport of athletic, the participants come from western africa are the outstanding, simply because of their DNA, in the World athletic in 2006, these group of athlete occupied for 7 out of 8 highest rankings. Presumably, without physically power you can also be a great athlete but just a little bit harder.
On the other hand, metal strength play a vital role in sports too because you have to think to much to make a wise choice in every situation. For instance, a football player knows how and when he or she should pass the ball and when they should shoot it, the decision must be accurate if their want to be the winners. Furthermore, if you are in a adversity, mental strength help you to be calm and stronger to cope with the problem or after a injury, everything wil be much more worse and it is a time you have to be mentally strong enough to face to face with the problems.
In concusion, if you are physically strong, it is a chance for to be a great athlete, if not, you can try your best to have unbeatable mental strength to succeed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The proper name in singular (africa) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
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Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... can also be a great athlete but just a little bit harder. On the other hand, metal str...
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Suggestion:
...r hand, metal strength play a vital role in sports too because you have to think ...
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...in sports too because you have to think to much to make a wise choice in every sit...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...the winners. Furthermore, if you are in a adversity, mental strength help you to ...
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...oblem or after a injury, everything wil be much more worse and it is a time you ha...
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Message: Use only 'worse' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: worse
... after a injury, everything wil be much more worse and it is a time you have to be mentall...
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Suggestion: to face
...e you have to be mentally strong enough to face to face with the problems. In concusion, if ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59748427673 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58221102414 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534591194969 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.2592033902 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.2 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.468660605384 0.244688304435 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187293871187 0.084324248473 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930320081123 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.300733076321 0.151304729494 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401842641741 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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