People are anxious for luxurious things like big parties or weddings which are frequently a way of praising themselves but nothing else. These kind of celebrations may stay in people’s mind forever, but their negative consequences including waste of money and conflicts among family members are sometimes inevitable.
Extensive celebrations mean the same as medium or small ones in origin but not in terms of financial aspect, as they require huge amount of resources which can be bought with money. For the preparation for a large wedding people spend a lot of money on the decoration, orchestra, food and renting a place to meet guests. As the true conception of the celebration stays the same expending money on these items is just a wasteful occasion. Because a lot of food may be uneaten and thrown away, and the decorations would not be reused afterwards. Thanks to the development of technology there is no need for vocalists as they can be replaced with a sole DJ. Instead people can save that money for their future plans, for example they may buy a car or a house which serves for them through their lives.
Further issue is conflict among family members which would emerge from misunderstanding each other. Young people naturally tend to argue with the elderly in almost everything and if they want to have their wedding organized largely hardly anybody can make them rethink about their decision. Because the youth want their wedding day to stay in their mind as an unforgettable event. They may insist on arranging extensive wedding although their financial status is insufficient. This misunderstanding may leave parents two ways either to reject their children’s wishes or to get into a debt.
In conclusion, organizing outsize celebrations can make them unforgettable but they cause some problems like waste of money or resources and conflict in a family simultaneously.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 138, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...f praising themselves but nothing else. These kind of celebrations may stay in people&apos...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mily members are sometimes inevitable. Extensive celebrations mean the same as ...
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Line 3, column 322, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ood and renting a place to meet guests. As the true conception of the celebration ...
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Line 3, column 656, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...as they can be replaced with a sole DJ. Instead people can save that money for their fu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13504823151 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95272455777 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565916398714 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4288678114 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.071428571 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200857211913 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705732760578 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582124014223 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132584631364 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536022619201 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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