In our world today, there are some changes in the dressing styles of a typical man or woman. What changes have you observed so far? What are the causes? Are the changes in making a positive or negative tendency?
Since quality of people life have enhanced, people were more and more interested in cloths. Specifically, they change their thought of dressing for both men and women which create many new fashionable tendencies.
It is complicated to realize that the alteration of dressing is manifested in the various forms and existed in many places and periods. For example, in the past women have a tendency to wear cloths of feminine characteristics like “ao dai” and skirt, but now women often wear jeans and T-shirts seeming more dynamic and comfortable. People also change their style of dressing in workplaces. Many companies allow their employees abandon Western clothes to wear informal cloths as long as they are polite and appropriate for the working environment.
It is difficult to determine what are the reason for these recent changes. In the past few years, the world of fashion has spread and vigorously affected by the culture of other countries, for example, the "Hallyu wave" of Korean hits fashion and the lifestyle of the young generation in Vietnam, seemingly everywhere. Additionally, the changing trends in workplace clothing are also one of the causes. Over time, companies and corporates have realized how measurable the freedom of dressing affects the creativity and productive capacity of employees. For example, employees are being given the liberty to add a touch of their personalities through accessories, colors, and so on.
To summarize, changing the dressing style has a sturdy impact on the community in a positive way. Consequently, It allows everyone show their personality to make a good impression on the others people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 80, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...le has a sturdy impact on the community in a positive way. Consequently, It allows everyone show ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36121673004 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96625715174 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593155893536 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.931224432 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.461538462 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17690865956 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699508582942 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694700639337 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112443511005 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321497180537 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.