Over the last decades, the media has promoted the image young thin women as ideal. What problem has this caused ? What solutions can you suggest to this issue ?
Media and promotions have always seen a connection. 21st century, right from the beginning, has seen tremendous changes. And so has the trends of fashions. Fashion, clothes, and body-shapes all such and many more promote the image of young thin women. Media has made their image so perfect that they are considered as epitome of beauty. A detailed discussion enumerating the problems and solutions are dispensed below.
Media has created a benchmark of beauty. Tall, thin, fair and brown hair. People often judge one on the basis of their physical appearance. The outcome of this practice are prominently very negative, “body shaming” is one such. Many girls are trolled for being too curvy. Sushmita Sen, one of the strongest women, faced one such. Another devastating impact that it has caused is making women more “dented” and “painted”.
Sometimes the society forces one to loose weight so that can have ideal shape for marriage. This not only turns into physical transformation but also transform the mental state of a person. One becomes so judgmental in thoughts, which can ruin the society as a whole.
Every problem has a solution. A good deal of solutions suggests one to be more confident and understanding. “Acceptance” is another in the list. Accepting what one is and what one has can make a difference changing the attitude of the society and avoiding judging one can lead to a better lifestyle. Girls need to be taught to be more focused on the career which is more significant than any other thing.
Winding up this essay suggests that society will only change if we make a change. And media will only promote those changes. There should be a proper concern for every human being on this earth
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[3]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
.... Sometimes the society forces one to loose weight so that can have ideal shape for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05862068966 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03475899997 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58275862069 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4165191214 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.125 106.682146367 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.0833333333 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.708333333333 7.06120827912 10% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225001388615 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548989564132 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423289930055 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116717494925 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350813348523 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.18 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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