Over the last few decades, the media has promoted the image of young thin women as being ideal. What problem has this caused? What solutions can you suggest to this issue?
It is true that nowadays due the widespread advertisements in the media, a perfect woman is known as the slimmest one. Although there have undoubtedly been some negative consequences of this trend, societies can take steps to mitigate these problems.
As all of programs in the media focus of thin women indirectly as the best one, several related problems have been emerged. On the societal level, women's appearance has been the first key factor to judge them. In fact, people, unconsciously, tend to communicate with tall slender women rather than fat one. As a clear example, directors prefer to employ zero-size actresses, even if they are less qualified than others, to attract regular viewers. From an individual level, having compared with supermodels, a majority of women lose their confidence in different facets. They may forget the positive aspects of their personalities and just feel negatively about their bodies. Therefore, it may be that they begin to use dangerous chemical drugs to be thin, which not only does not work, but also it may make new serious problems for them.
There are several actions that societies could take to solve problems described above. Firstly, a simple solution would be to run a worldwide campaign in which successful women, whether they are thin or not, are introduced to others. In this way, gradually, people realize that appearance is not as important as they though. In other word, they find the insight that setting the valuable goals and working hard to achieve them is much more worthwhile. A second measure would be for governments to implement new rules in modeling industry. For instance, specifying the minimum BIM for the participators in catwalk shows or made them to check their health condition regularly.
In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that have been made as the popularity of thin models.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11290322581 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74428931225 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632258064516 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.8568062894 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.0625 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151160675105 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046470126577 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401236557604 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956402848625 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0129929489209 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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