Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.
Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.
Overpopulation of Urban area is one of the pressing issue that we are facing today. The recent few decades are the witness of the development in urbanisation. Amid this development, there is one phenomenon that has associated with it. According to this phenomenon, overcrowding of people in city area has led to numerous problems. These are several puzzles that have connected with incident of overpopulation. There are also possible solutions that have combated with it. I will posit my perspective about it.
To commence with, there are multifarious puzzles which depict the phenomenon of overcrowding people. The remarkable problem is increasing an unemployment rate. To be justified, public have no alternative way for betterment of their life in rural area. With a lack of education, they have faced lot to get a job in urban area that lead to higher unemployment percentage. More importantly, overpopulation is cause of putting pressure on renewable sources such as trees and forest. Increase in number of people in city area , all people need a shelter for living and government has to cut down trees for expanding area for living that tend to disrupt the ecological cycle by this activity.
To embark on multiple measures that can be taken by government and people. In terms of government, they should improve all the facilities and amenities of countryside dwellers. Then job opportunity should be built up by placing some projects nearby them. Secondly, local authorities should more emphasis on education. This may result in, people are getting aware from overpopulation problems and develop their own rural sight with the help of fund that can be supported by local government.
Regarding individuals, they should obey the rules and regulations and cooperate the steps which can be taken by government. Furthermore, people need to educate themselves. To addition that people are able to convert that rural areas to urban areas with qualifications and stand up the opportunity for all rural dwellers.
Aggelomerating all the points to conclude that the problem of overcrowding in city sector that has combated by government and individuals by taking some crucial steps.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, well, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28080229226 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09564671295 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532951289398 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3604417445 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7727272727 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8636363636 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95454545455 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181343541144 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470090611509 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590551757411 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922545237457 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539399383338 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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