Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.

Rising population in urban cities can be factor of some problems. This essay will discuss main problems which associated with increasing number of population in urban areas and suggest a viable solution.

First of all, rising amount of population causes high crime rate. In urban cities amount of crime is more than other places bacause of homelesslines, lack of money and etc. As a result of high crime rate inhabitant's life are in danger and it can cause to harm their life and wealth. For instance, the amount of crime which occurs in urban areas in a year is equal to the amount of crime happened in rural places in 10 years.

In addition to this, inhabitants of urban cities spends much more money than villagers. On account of productes' and services ' expensive price they have to spend more money than others. Owing to this reason they try to earn more money and get additional jobs, so it evokes some problems, such as, corruption, having no time to have a rest or not to spend time with family For example, local people in rural places can live 2 months instead of townsmans' living 1 month.

To solve criminal problems in urban areas government should produce strickt rules and control their fullfillment. Also they should make these rules understandible for the people. For example, government might designate employees to make these rules comprehensible for the other people.

One of the most common solution for this problem is decreasing prices of products in urban areas or increasing amount of products or amount of import. In other words, government should sign contracts with other countries to recieve products. For instance, agreements about rising amount of agricultural, building, plastic and other products should be done.

To conclude, overpopulation of urban areas may cause some problems which can be solved by government, such as, high crime rate, rising costs of products.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, first of all, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08544303797 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65588164995 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509493670886 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8398219902 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.4375 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154548001223 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538027945907 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439594851959 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859064765377 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389358888378 0.056905535591 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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