Overwight
Being Overweight has long become one of the main concerns among many people all over the world, which has considerably affected their well-being and fitness.
Obesity is a result of many factors same as incorrect nutrition, less activity, sedentary jobs, and improper habits of eating. In general, to overcome this problem we have to keep a healthy diet besides sports and activities that burn extra calories, and it would be better to say that, we must change our lifestyle.
Malnutrition is one of the most impressive factors on our body health which should be taken into account to keep fitness and prevent being overweight. Eating junk foods and fast foods, do no having a specific timing to have daily meals, not considering fresh vegetables and fruits for our nutrition programme are some examples about nutrition, leading to increased weight and consequently different diseases among the people. The other cause of weight rising is for leaving sports and not having enough physical activity during the day. Sedentary jobs, new inventions and facilities same as remote controls for new devices or convenient transportation vehicles are some examples in our modern life which can make people lazy with less physical activity.
To prevent being overweight we should make a balance between input and output amount of calories in our body. To address this problem, we ought to care about the type of foods and their ingredients. Vegetables are beneficial for our health and contain less calory and should be considered in the diet plan, while greasy and salty foods can increase our weight and be harmful to the body. Moreover, sportive activities, doing it yourself at home, regular walking plan are some instances that not only to help us to keep the physical fitness but also burn additive calories and prevent probable increments of weight.
Increasing weight has already been a serious issue to all age groups of society. If we ignore this important problem, it will definitely threaten our health and make different illnesses for us. Using a proper nutritional food plan and taking up regular exercises and physical activities will make a healthy body for people, while it can also improve our mental abilities.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-02-19 | Esmaeil949 | 11 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 766, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...with less physical activity. To prevent being overweight we should ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, if, moreover, so, well, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1881.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18181818182 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74394547512 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570247933884 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.6195402983 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.692307692 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9230769231 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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