Parents nowadays delay childbirth .Does the advantages overweight the disadvantages give your opinion.
Making a family is a major step in a couple's life. Presently, many married couples stand with the notion of postponing having an additional family member, a baby, which can be good and bad at once. Through this essay, I will mention the primar merits and demrits this trend brings out.
To begin with, delaying childbirth can sometimes be advatnageous for several reasons. One is that it allows parents more time to secure stable financial conditions, as freshly married couples are still new to dealing with this responsibility and their economic situation is fragile. Therefore, having an additional individual can form a burden making it even worse. Furthermore, by slowing down in this process, couples would get the opportunity of knowing more about one another and establishing a strong connection before getting troubled with a child and eventually divorce. Thus, it is quiet critical for married people to think twice and take their time when planning to have children.
On the other hand, we must consider that disadvantages that come out of this notion. Firstly, when parents delay making a family, they sometimes forget that it would be harder for them to create links and connections with younger children due to the great difference between ages, they would even struggle in understanding and communicating with them. In addition to this, the more late having kids is, the more attached parents become to their professional life, so when time for having babies comes, many couples won't be available to look after them because of work pressure. Consequently, a frail and delicate parent-child relationship would rise in between.
Therefore, I certainly believe that couples should balance between family and work responsibilities in order to live more fulfilling lives from many aspects. Before deciding to make a family, parents must consider all positive and negative outcomes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 38, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'couples'' or 'couple's'?
Suggestion: couples'; couple's
Making a family is a major step in a couples life. Presently, many married couples s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, so, still, therefore, thus, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26072607261 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82279911423 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613861386139 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3400167478 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.857142857 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0665281855573 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0259992233937 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030352653362 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0379911351556 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279014574039 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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