Making a family is a major step in a couple's life. Presently, many married couples stand with the notion of postponing having an additional family member, a baby, which can be good and bad at once. Through this essay, I will mention the primar merits and demerits this trend brings out.
To begin with, delaying childbirth has several pros. One advantage is that it allows parents more time to secure stable financial conditions, as freshly married couples are still new to dealing with this responsibility and their economic situation is fragile. Therefore, having an additional individual can form a burden making it even worse. Furthermore, by slowing down in this process, couples would get the opportunity of knowing more about one another and establishing a strong connection before getting troubled with a child and eventually divorce. Thus, it is quiet critical for married people to think twice and take their time when planning to have children.
On the other hand, we must consider that disadvantages that come out of this notion. Firstly, when parents delay making a family, they sometimes forget that it would be harder for them to create links and connections with younger children due to the great difference between ages, they would even struggle in understanding and communicating with them. Another drawback is that the more late having kids is, the more attached parents become to their professional life, so when time for having babies comes, many couples won't be available to look after them because of work pressure. Consequently, a frail and delicate parent-child relationship would rise in between.
In conclusion, delaying childbirth brings out many pros and cons. I certainly believe that couples should balance between family and work responsibilities in order to live more fulfilling lives from many aspects. Before deciding to make a family, parents must consider all the merits and demerits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 38, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'couples'' or 'couple's'?
Suggestion: couples'; couple's
Making a family is a major step in a couples life. Presently, many married couples s...
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Line 2, column 66, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ildbirth has several pros. One advantage is that it allows parents more time to s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, so, still, therefore, thus, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23624595469 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78654119786 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605177993528 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6786524689 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.866666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0923473883546 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375740670946 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445317802221 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0561887711976 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328129070645 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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