Parents should spend more time with their children helping them with their homework. Do you agree or disagree?
Irrefutably, children are the backbone of the society, because, parents should give extra hours to their little ones and support them in their assignment. I agree with this statement as parents aware of their children behaviour.
To begin with, parents are an essential part of the socialization process of a new-born child. If family spend more time with children they build good relationships with them, because, youngsters also feel free with their parents about personal and study-related problems without any hesitation which helps in students education and development in cognitive skill. Apart from this, they also give information about the day-to-day life and aware their children from about present society.
Furthermore, parents always worry about their children grades in class ,if they check it out daily basis performance and spend time with them due to which they know about the strength and weaknesses of their children and helping them in their homework where their little one struck and face problem they try to solve problems with polite manners then children of scorer better in the class. On other hand, parents motivate their children for competitive examination and provide material what their children’s want
Hence, parents play a vital role in person life and they play a role as a guide in the life of children while they always give the right direction to their little one and help them to tackle difficult situation with peaceful mind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 71, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rry about their children grades in class ,if they check it out daily basis perform...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, while, apart from, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30508474576 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61350697369 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567796610169 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.943569233 49.4020404114 245% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 178.857142857 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.7142857143 20.7667163134 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.496708874929 0.244688304435 203% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.254361824491 0.084324248473 302% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111418655118 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323565928112 0.151304729494 214% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904142654019 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.0946893788 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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