In this new era and by the help of the advancement of technology, people to do their chores from home instead of commuting to work like the past. In this outline, I will discuss some positive and negative points.
To begin with, it is clear-cut that technology has made our lives easier and more comfortable in all aspects. In this respect, these days the majority of people would prefer doing their work from home until they can save time and travel costs, therefore the obtained money and time can be spent on serious social issues such as poverty, air pollution, traffic congestion, and youth unemployment. Another advantage of remoting work would be based on psychological and physiological approaches. In other words, anxiety, tension, stress are remarkably reduced and life expectancy can culture between new and old generations.
In spite of the advantages, there are a few demerits. As you know many labors to pass the buck as easy as pie and there is no certain law to control them every day at the exact time or may flout company regulations. For example, in the past people had to use their own card to inform other departments that I am on or off duty, however, today they feel free to perform their jobs without any responsibilities. To say the least, face to face communications and regular contacts are less day-to-day and also interaction and cooperation hard to grasp one day.
To sum up, working from home with new innovations will have both positive and negative effects. Whilst smart working can reduce the huge amount of money and increase happiness, there is still a little concern.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, for example, such as, you know, in other words, in spite of, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89051094891 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7799871631 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664233576642 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5126037071 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.666666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260716690963 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765269988488 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714065855901 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148258530988 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482359037685 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.