In the past, people store knowledge in the books. Nowadays people store knowledge on the internet. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Owing to technology advances, people keeping knowledge on the internet instead of writing into the books. Although there are some drawbacks associated with storing knowledge on the internet, I believe that the benefits outweigh the negative impacts.
On the one hand, there are several drawbacks to saving knowledge on the internet. Firstly, spending too much time on screen can be harmful for our eyes because of blue light. There is a data that supports that blue light can affect people’s sleep cycles, contribute to eye fatigue, and even hurts the retina in the black of eyes. Secondly, the websites on the internet are not always safe. For example, people may click the unsafe site when they are searching knowledge on the internet, their private information on the mobile phone or computer can be stolen by hackers.
On the other hand, I believe that storing knowledge on the internet has more positive effects than ones. First, internet is one of the most important resource in modern world. Basically, people can search for knowledge that they want to know anywhere anytime. Secondly, books can be easy to teared, turned yellow after long time used and the papers can be ruined by water. If people do not keep them safely, once they gone, it is gone forever, we will not able to know what information in the books. Finally, it helps people to protect the forest and environment. For instance, the ecological balance of nature has been disturbed due to a large number of trees have been cut down as a material for making papers.
In conclusion, while storing knowledge on the internet have some negative effects, my own view is that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 419, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'went'?
Suggestion: went
...ople do not keep them safely, once they gone, it is gone forever, we will not able t...
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Line 5, column 638, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...nce of nature has been disturbed due to a large number of trees have been cut down as a material ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97183098592 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54833263263 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588028169014 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9441542149 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328003243516 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108773946384 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785779279029 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223550610665 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575293916513 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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