In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?
To date, shopping is considered to be a pleasant way of spending time rather than a boring task. From my perspective, it would be reasonable to partly agree with this statement.
On the one hand, buying various clothes and even food sometimes enables a person’s happiness. There is a common opinion that while doing shopping people are distracted from their problems and relax, which makes them feel better and regard shopping as a hobby. Thus, for some people at present shopping becomes one of the ways to spend time pleasantly and effectively.
But on the other hand, doing shopping as a hobby cannot be considered to be a definitely positive tendency. First of all, buying things too often and in enormous quantities usually leads to non-controlled consumerism. Therefore, more and more clothes and other products are thrown away, damaging environment and causing more pollution, as not all of them can be recycled. Secondly, there is a possibility that regarding shopping as a hobby will transform into a serious psychological illness, when a person is not able to control amounts of money spent on buying clothes and products. Furthermore, such people continue doing useless shopping every day and in some period of time they realize that are out of money and have to borrow it, making the situation even worse.
In conclusion, shopping can be regarded either as a useful hobby or a harmful trend. Therefore, it is paramount to be a reasonable consumer and enable shopping to be only a pleasant and not harmful experience both for a person and environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... useless shopping every day and in some period of time they realize that are out of money and ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ow it, making the situation even worse. In conclusion, shopping can be regarded ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0153256705 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87140659813 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574712643678 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4986612903 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.083333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177757086716 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686696185649 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573164902426 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107023923037 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197286507496 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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