Buying daily necessities had been common duty a long ago. In this essay, I would discuss how shopping become a positive trend today.
Comparing in the past. Purchasing goods needs to be planned and what-buy-list are practised then strickly follows to save time. Usually people travel to distance to buy things they need. Which result as a time consuming duty.
As today, shopping become increasingly popular because of the influence of technology. Although it has a down side of people spending more money on things they do not really need. It has become a hobby specially for the younger generation as they tend to spend more time online. For example, buying food and closthes online is easier rather than going to malls or shops. It saves them time and hazzle of traffic as well as the busy crowded place of shopping centre.
Overall it has a positve impact in ours lives, giving as convinience and ease just my one click of a botton. The products you need will be delivered straight on your door step.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 88, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...because of the influence of technology. Although it has a down side of people spending m...
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Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: DOWN_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'downside'?
Suggestion: downside
...luence of technology. Although it has a down side of people spending more money on things...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
really, then, well, as to, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 175.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79428571429 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48519534813 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.708571428571 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 506.74238477 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3087444252 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.5384615385 106.682146367 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4615384615 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128809377848 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437006795728 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466096009012 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0705487512745 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336289121135 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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