In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
In the modern era, studying in foreign university by students is becoming increasingly popular. These days, more and more students have the chance to study in countries such as Canada,USA,United Kingdom and many more areas. While this essay intends to discuss both pros and cons.
There are mainly two benefits of studying in other country. Firstly, the biggest advantage of studying abroad is that foreign universities offers plethora of courses than the university of your motherland. For instance, the Canada universities gives the students varieties of courses compare to my nation universities. Secondly, you can learn culture of different types of citizens. It gives you chance to know about how people live their and also their behaviour. To illustrate, one of my friend went to Canada to masters degree, he did not know about Canadian culture at that time but by spending a few years he came to know about the culture of Canada. Hence, studying abroad give us more choices of course and also it enhance our skill in culture tradition.
As every garden has some weeds, similarly studying in other nation has also some drawbacks. At first, after immigrating to other country for the further education mankind do not know about the language of that particular country. So, first students will face some issues over the language. However, they will learn the language in a couple of times. To cite an example, my cousin went to France to study masters last year, he faced many problems over the language issue, but after taking the French classes, now he can speak French language very clearly and fluently. Last but not least, there are universities students, who face difficulties in paying fees. Going to foreign universities, there are plethora of parents who could not afford their children universities fees. For example, Canadian university offers many different opportunities of job but only part-time while student, so from this student can start paying universities fees. Therefore, there are also some drawbacks of studying abroad like language and paying up fees.
To sum up, this essay discussed the benefits and drawbacks of studying at foreign universities. Although these days, abroad universities has become popular and students may go to abroad for the further education after completing secondary education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , USA
...nce to study in countries such as Canada,USA,United Kingdom and many more areas. Whi...
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Line 3, column 723, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'enhances'?
Suggestion: enhances
...e us more choices of course and also it enhance our skill in culture tradition. As e...
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Line 5, column 816, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...For example, Canadian university offers many different opportunities of job but only part-time...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, of course, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1967.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24533333333 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74409718001 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.92015018 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238912737497 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715589462918 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419533132185 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149564148945 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263386006452 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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