At present time, there is a greatest scope to study overseas. However, some decades ago the student are likely to study in their own nations, despite it has some drawbacks, the benefit are more of this alteration.
The increasing chances to study overseas have some demerits. First one is that the students who go to abroad for study, feel homesick. Some students may be not stayed far away from home or family before going abroad ,and when they have to stay longer with their family they feel along and miss their family. As a result, they do not able to concentrate on their study and do loss of their own. For example, one of my cousins went to France for study and faced an unknown environment as well as unknown people. This, he got frustrated and started missing his home.
On the other hand, study overseas is bearing lots of benefits. While a student go abroad for higher study he can able to know about new culture as every country has its own culture and tradition. Moreover, student is also get a chance to introduce his nation in front of the world, because, a student get an opportunity to to tell something about his own country and own tradition towards other citizen. Through this we are gaining respect from through this we are gaining respect from other nations of the globe. Furthermore, in abroad there a great opportunity to do job at a precious position and build a bright future for own as well as there next generation, due to going developed countries developing countries, as they have an enlarged sectors of work and doing those works, a man can earn more money than that of his own developing countries.
In conclusion, through there have some drawbacks to study overseas, such as getting homesick, it gives an opportunity for learner to introduce ones culture amongst other countries, and have a great chance to build a brighter future, even though the ancient people liked to study in own country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
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Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... from home or family before going abroad ,and when they have to stay longer with t...
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Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'got', 'gotten'.
Suggestion: got; gotten
...nd tradition. Moreover, student is also get a chance to introduce his nation in fro...
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Line 5, column 321, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
..., because, a student get an opportunity to to tell something about his own country an...
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Line 7, column 144, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...an opportunity for learner to introduce ones culture amongst other countries, and ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73076923077 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49236255046 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526627218935 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.9590849516 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.214285714 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4285714286 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336555581262 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112173991711 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596787365604 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208706519286 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315263787263 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.